High Above Me

[Leanne]

I thought the sun was a good metaphor for the sun..

I keep re-reading this what do you mean?

He means that he thinks I'm being a smart arse... and he's possibly correct

As to category -- well, call it a fusion if you like, but I'm always wary of categorising poems. As you know, it's not line breaks that make a poem, it's something far less tangible. Some would probably call this poetic prose. Some others would call it a poem in structured sentences. Write as the mood strikes you and if it works, leave it be.