12-20-2011, 05:24 PM
Your line breaks act as punctuation, still I see no reason to leave it out as it makes the reading easier, and there is no reason to leave it out. While not earth shaking, it is a nice snippet of insight into life as it goes along... even if it does date you a bit. Still, I think it is the bees knees and rather peachy keen!
Dale
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.