12-20-2011, 05:09 AM
You know, the most romantic part in this entirely romantic poem is "two awkward people, unversed, unrehearsed in love" -- that's just gorgeous.
My only concern is the slight incongruity of Clark Kent rescuing anyone from choppy seas -- he's such an urban figure, he really needs a less piratical setting
I do like this a lot though, it's all I love best about proper, grownup love.
My only concern is the slight incongruity of Clark Kent rescuing anyone from choppy seas -- he's such an urban figure, he really needs a less piratical setting
I do like this a lot though, it's all I love best about proper, grownup love.
It could be worse