12-20-2011, 05:05 AM
Love the "plop plop" granny 
You've made a faux pas though... one must never offer editing advice on cutter poetry... every word comes straight from the heart and changing it just isn't being true to the poem.

You've made a faux pas though... one must never offer editing advice on cutter poetry... every word comes straight from the heart and changing it just isn't being true to the poem.
It could be worse
