What's it all about?

[grannyjill]

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Hey this looks like the genuine article....it better not be!

My only request would be for you to change the first mention of 'hole' to something else as it is a little confusing.
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I thought I'd go away and play too.....but went a step further
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on the cutting room floor

hot lines
criss-crossing blue lines
drawn with a fine Toledo blade
such a simple passive thing to do
quietly softly
drip drip drip....drip
pooling beneath my finger-tips
scarlet and garish the pattern it makes
plop plop onto mother’s cold tiled floor
splashing pretty cherry blossom petals
up the bathroom door
it’s curious
how life may seep away
quietly softly on such a fine day