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canyon
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12-19-2011, 08:51 PM
Hey, just a briefy...in my present feverish state my eyes aren't functioning as they should....I just read 'heard the echo of sunlight' as 'heard the ache of sunlight'....and do you know? I really liked it....maybe I will use it somewhere - who knows.
ps - the revised poem works a treat. |
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RE: canyon - by grannyjill - 11-30-2011, 04:51 PM
RE: canyon - by Philatone - 11-30-2011, 10:57 PM
RE: canyon - by grannyjill - 12-01-2011, 04:29 PM
RE: canyon - by Leanne - 12-04-2011, 07:52 AM
RE: canyon - by Aish - 12-19-2011, 07:50 PM
RE: canyon - by grannyjill - 12-19-2011, 08:51 PM
RE: canyon - by Philatone - 12-20-2011, 02:20 PM
RE: canyon - by billy - 01-17-2012, 10:13 PM
RE: canyon - by Wildcard - 01-20-2012, 05:29 AM
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