12-18-2011, 09:24 PM
it's all there, it just feels like it's been said before. it's not cliche, it just feels a bit weak.
i think maybe it's the flow of the thing. i do enjoy the sentiment though.
no constructive feedback as to how i'd try and improve anything, which is really bad i know. (sorry)
thanks for the read as always.
i think maybe it's the flow of the thing. i do enjoy the sentiment though.
no constructive feedback as to how i'd try and improve anything, which is really bad i know. (sorry)
thanks for the read as always.