Danu's Sorrow
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sometimes when i see a poem that feels so out of my league i have to admit i feel like passing it by. but i don't i try and do a line by line and the feedback i give could well be a horse shed full of shit hehe. but i know i got something from it. i ogten get things arse over tit but i think it's the only way to improve on the feedback side of things. if something is that good i think it a done deal, i just try to say why i think that way.
no one really has an excuse for not giving feedback, unless of course you feel self-conscious etc. just give it ago.
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Danu's Sorrow - by Leanne - 11-15-2011, 12:07 PM
RE: Danu's Sorrow - by Philatone - 11-28-2011, 02:51 PM
RE: Danu's Sorrow - by grannyjill - 11-28-2011, 04:10 PM
RE: Danu's Sorrow - by Leanne - 11-29-2011, 05:04 AM
RE: Danu's Sorrow - by billy - 12-07-2011, 11:46 PM
RE: Danu's Sorrow - by Wildcard - 12-08-2011, 06:31 AM
RE: Danu's Sorrow - by billy - 12-11-2011, 08:12 PM
RE: Danu's Sorrow - by Leanne - 12-11-2011, 11:37 AM
RE: Danu's Sorrow - by Leanne - 12-12-2011, 06:10 AM
RE: Danu's Sorrow - by billy - 12-14-2011, 10:17 PM
RE: Danu's Sorrow - by Philatone - 12-15-2011, 07:51 AM
RE: Danu's Sorrow - by Leanne - 12-19-2011, 03:30 PM



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