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It just is:

It just is:
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#8
12-12-2011, 09:55 AM
Are you suggesting he shorten the French by half a foot, or by a whole head?

Meter-wise, I'd tend to prefer an alternative to the triolet (insert scatological remark here) -- perhaps "in sonnet, ode or villanelle"?
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It just is: - by billy - 12-11-2011, 11:10 PM
RE: It just is: - by Erthona - 12-11-2011, 11:40 PM
RE: It just is: - by billy - 12-11-2011, 11:59 PM
RE: It just is: - by Erthona - 12-12-2011, 12:13 AM
RE: It just is: - by grannyjill - 12-12-2011, 12:26 AM
RE: It just is: - by Leanne - 12-12-2011, 05:20 AM
RE: It just is: - by Erthona - 12-12-2011, 09:50 AM
RE: It just is: - by billy - 12-13-2011, 08:35 PM
RE: It just is: - by Leanne - 12-12-2011, 09:55 AM
RE: It just is: - by Erthona - 12-12-2011, 10:05 AM
RE: It just is: - by grannyjill - 12-13-2011, 08:07 AM
RE: It just is: - by Erthona - 12-13-2011, 12:38 PM
RE: It just is: - by grannyjill - 12-13-2011, 05:33 PM
RE: It just is: - by Erthona - 12-13-2011, 07:14 PM
RE: It just is: - by billy - 12-13-2011, 08:55 PM
RE: It just is: - by grannyjill - 12-13-2011, 08:58 PM
RE: It just is: - by billy - 12-13-2011, 10:19 PM
RE: It just is: - by billy - 11-29-2014, 07:43 PM



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