12-11-2011, 11:56 PM
I don't know what 'cleave' poetry is. Is it worth me finding out?
Actually, I don't think your words need tweaking...all you will have to do is think of the arrangement of your lines - and Bingo, there you are.
ps - yesterday we had William aged 2 (all day) He was poorly...not much creativity going on there for me - apart from thinking of ways to keep him happy and to read 'Everyone hide from Wibbly Pig' about 100 times
Actually, I don't think your words need tweaking...all you will have to do is think of the arrangement of your lines - and Bingo, there you are.
ps - yesterday we had William aged 2 (all day) He was poorly...not much creativity going on there for me - apart from thinking of ways to keep him happy and to read 'Everyone hide from Wibbly Pig' about 100 times