12-11-2011, 10:06 PM
Hang on a minute - the ONLY thing I know about Haiku is the syllables go like this
5, 7, 5
this one is 4, 6, 6
I've been short changed and the gain of a syllable on the last line won't compensate me for that!
5, 7, 5
this one is 4, 6, 6
I've been short changed and the gain of a syllable on the last line won't compensate me for that!