12-04-2011, 05:54 PM
Hey, alright man! This seems to be about how perceiving the world without intelligent design is more prone to reveal its beauty- it also talks about how the narrator does this. That's a pretty good statement that this reader can get behind. Not really sure what a 'libertine' is, but being both 'the caesar of love and hate' is a striking line. The single nitpick to offer is the use of the word 'founts'- seems a little old hat for a poem who's subject matter is the world sans god (a relatively new idea in human history).
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