12-02-2011, 03:07 AM
As I know now what this poem is referring to it is difficult for me to fully assess the impact of the words 'little guitar' im your amended poem...but, I reckon if I had read this version rather than the previous re-write I don't think I should have had the difficulty I experienced first time around.
(........of course, if I had read the thread the right way up, there wouldn't have been any problem at all....that'll larn me!)
I think this poem will stay in my mind for a long time.
(........of course, if I had read the thread the right way up, there wouldn't have been any problem at all....that'll larn me!)
I think this poem will stay in my mind for a long time.

