We Were Strangers? (Double Etheree)

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I love this. I really like the progression of the narrative, and how the form complemented that, making the reader hyper-sensitive and hyper-aware of time as it was measured out. What I didn't much like was L10, "this world for him was ended"; it read a bit like a filler detail since we already know he committed suicide. But that's pretty much it for the quibble. I very much enjoyed this.