11-13-2011, 08:26 AM
I am still working my way through this but I thoroughly enjoyed it -- when I started reading, the first stanza made me think I was in for a Sylvia Plath-like episode, especially when I thought the second stanza could easily be speaking about a home cremation by kids with a Lord of the Flies hangover 
Then the light tone change of "it is getting to be a problem", which is very dry.
I am -- perhaps disturbingly -- enamoured of your chicken imagery. And your closing stanza is so damn witty I wish I'd written it
I can't be much more help at this point, I just wanted to let you know I'd read it and wasn't ignoring you...
Then the light tone change of "it is getting to be a problem", which is very dry. I am -- perhaps disturbingly -- enamoured of your chicken imagery. And your closing stanza is so damn witty I wish I'd written it
I can't be much more help at this point, I just wanted to let you know I'd read it and wasn't ignoring you...
It could be worse