11-12-2011, 08:07 PM
Aha - I get your comma placement -but, hm
If it said 'HE'S a shrewish queen our king, likes to dress up for breakfast' - this would make sense to me since queen has more than one meaning...but, your version doesn't do it for me.
........or does the sentence refer to something that I am not aware of (or should I say 'Of which I am not aware)?
If it said 'HE'S a shrewish queen our king, likes to dress up for breakfast' - this would make sense to me since queen has more than one meaning...but, your version doesn't do it for me.
........or does the sentence refer to something that I am not aware of (or should I say 'Of which I am not aware)?

