11-12-2011, 09:16 AM
Thank you for your imput....I will go away and ponder on your suggestions.
This is a bit of sham poem since the views expressed are those of a soldier in the time of Rupert Brooke, and are not necessarily my views...I now see the last line as ironic...since people don't appreciate the sacrifice made by previous generations.
(As I noticed to-day during the 2 minutes silence in Birmingham City centre and lots of shoppers were ignoring it and chatting and walking around)
This is a bit of sham poem since the views expressed are those of a soldier in the time of Rupert Brooke, and are not necessarily my views...I now see the last line as ironic...since people don't appreciate the sacrifice made by previous generations.
(As I noticed to-day during the 2 minutes silence in Birmingham City centre and lots of shoppers were ignoring it and chatting and walking around)