10-31-2011, 09:42 AM
we take what we can hehe.
the main thing i got from your poem was a feeling of what poetry must feel like.
i know this will sound really shitty; words being what the poetry is made of, but i think poetry is more than words.
it's what you have left when you take the mere words out of the poem. poetry is left and if they're lucky, the reader can bathe in the poetry; the words are just bathwater, the poetry is the warm feeling when you soak or the shiver when the cold invigorates.
you could have substituted oliverine and odovacar for a multitude of others and it would still have been what poetry should feel like.
i got carried away didn't i
i would buy a book of poetry like this, or steal it should i be broke 
the main thing i got from your poem was a feeling of what poetry must feel like.
i know this will sound really shitty; words being what the poetry is made of, but i think poetry is more than words.
it's what you have left when you take the mere words out of the poem. poetry is left and if they're lucky, the reader can bathe in the poetry; the words are just bathwater, the poetry is the warm feeling when you soak or the shiver when the cold invigorates.
you could have substituted oliverine and odovacar for a multitude of others and it would still have been what poetry should feel like.
i got carried away didn't i
i would buy a book of poetry like this, or steal it should i be broke