10-31-2011, 04:39 AM
Torn like Mark. Reminded me of case in this country, when an ignorant mob went and smashed up the house of-- a paediatrician.....
As to the poem itself, the line 'after we did it we left him there' could perhaps occur after the second stanza, and as a final line, while still remaining where it is. It would not alter the 'statement' quality too much. It is, incidentally, very like a police-statement.
As to the poem itself, the line 'after we did it we left him there' could perhaps occur after the second stanza, and as a final line, while still remaining where it is. It would not alter the 'statement' quality too much. It is, incidentally, very like a police-statement.