10-25-2011, 12:25 AM
Hi Jack,
I find this very much like Radiohead in a very good way. (I might not have thought about it without addy mentioning it) It definitely follows the pattern of a lot of songs. A big trend in songwriting is finding a chorus that becomes broader when layered with multiple perspective verses and this is what you poem does very well.
Thanks for sharing.
I find this very much like Radiohead in a very good way. (I might not have thought about it without addy mentioning it) It definitely follows the pattern of a lot of songs. A big trend in songwriting is finding a chorus that becomes broader when layered with multiple perspective verses and this is what you poem does very well.
Thanks for sharing.