10-24-2011, 11:09 AM
thanks mark, i've been trying to sort something out that can be really workshoped. and eventually after posting a few i think this is one that's really in need. that said i'd like to do it a little bit at a time so i don't get too confused...and i don't want to upset leanne by making people do full crits on it 
will get back to it later as i'm playing catch up.

will get back to it later as i'm playing catch up.
