Haiku:
#2
"I hear the barn owl" is interesting since the owl would be quiet in its hunt, and in fact the narrator "hears" the owl as the sound the prey makes. A very effective piece, I think.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Haiku: - by billy - 10-18-2011, 05:40 PM
RE: Haiku: - by addy - 10-20-2011, 05:22 PM
RE: Haiku: - by Aish - 10-22-2011, 06:09 PM
RE: Haiku: - by Wildcard - 10-23-2011, 12:14 AM
RE: Haiku: - by billy - 10-23-2011, 10:05 AM



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