Tolerance

Tolerance

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10-17-2011, 02:12 AM

I think you hit the nail on the head when you mention short stories. There's too much detail here for a poem, so what you're left with is an unfocused caricature. I may write this again in free verse and talk about these kinds of people rather than one specific character.
Thanks for the feedback, Traveler Smile

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Tolerance - by heslopian - 10-08-2011, 09:34 AM

RE: Tolerance - by billy - 10-09-2011, 09:17 AM

RE: Tolerance - by heslopian - 10-09-2011, 09:22 AM

RE: Tolerance - by billy - 10-09-2011, 09:28 AM

RE: Tolerance - by Leanne - 10-09-2011, 09:37 AM

RE: Tolerance - by heslopian - 10-09-2011, 09:49 AM

RE: Tolerance - by billy - 10-09-2011, 10:00 AM

RE: Tolerance - by Patrick Traveler - 10-16-2011, 07:33 PM

RE: Tolerance - by heslopian - 10-17-2011, 02:12 AM

RE: Tolerance - by bogpan - 10-20-2011, 03:08 PM

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