10-15-2011, 03:12 PM
You could definitely save the last bit V. Dorn 
... in the end its your poem, and we are only here to give guidance you may find helpful overall (but are not obligated to follow to a T). When as the author you decide to follow your gut, there's no real point in being half-hearted about it.
... in the end its your poem, and we are only here to give guidance you may find helpful overall (but are not obligated to follow to a T). When as the author you decide to follow your gut, there's no real point in being half-hearted about it.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?