***(I write)

[addy]

You've got a real gem with this one, i think.

I write –
on autumn leaves,
when the sun is
alive
The grass
is still
fragrant. Up til about this point it edges a little on cliche, but it does work well. It might be just me, but I think I would like it more if the arrangement of sun and grass was switched... only because "sun is alive" strikes me as the stronger line and the sequence of "leaves-grass-sun" makes sense to me. That's just my take on it, though.
And you are a dream which
I won’t
tell about.
My eyes are collecting colorful rains.
As in the mad years,
when
I ran with a cloth
to bandage the light. Line after line of perfection. Personally I like "mad years", and the bandage line is truly inspired. Honestly, this made me tear up a little. very beautiful.
The wings have left
and the golden sparkles I'd like this better as "golden sparks", but that may be just me which
you are writing with today,
without even knowing… lovely lines, but I do agree with Philatone that there might be something wrong with the grammar? It reads like an incomplete sentence to me. I'm not sure I'm reading it correctly so not really sure how to correct it either.

A shed
feather of Fujiyama.