***(I write)

[Philatone]

Ey bogpan!

I write – ...I like the dash
on autumn leaves,
when the sun is
alive
The grass
is still
fragrant. ...in one of these lines (3-7), some punctuation would help to guide me, unless you prefer the openness of meaning
And you are a dream which
I won’t
tell about.
My eyes are collecting colorful rains.
As in the mad years, ...I like mad here, but I think an even more specific adjective could make the "years" stand out even more; something to suggest more "craziness" or more "anger" depending on preference.
when
I ran with a cloth
to bandage the light. ...beautiful image, the light needing aid or just shielding
The wings have left
and the golden sparkles which ...is the "and" needed? I could be misinterpreting the line
you are writing with today,
without even knowing…

A shed
feather of Fujiyama. ...great ending!

just were my thoughts. I hope they find you well