To a Poet

To a Poet

Aish

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#10

10-09-2011, 01:19 AM

Welcome, Philatone! I seem to be late to the party. Smile

The re-write is stunning. I'm sorry I don't have anything constructive to add. This reminds me very much of Pablo Neruda's tone and pace. If he is a favorite, may I suggest you test run Rumi?

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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To a Poet - by Philatone - 10-07-2011, 11:16 AM

RE: To a Poet - by billy - 10-07-2011, 05:25 PM

RE: To a Poet - by heslopian - 10-07-2011, 06:47 PM

RE: To a Poet - by Todd - 10-07-2011, 10:59 PM

RE: To a Poet - by Philatone - 10-08-2011, 04:32 AM

RE: To a Poet - by billy - 10-08-2011, 06:09 AM

RE: To a Poet - by Todd - 10-08-2011, 06:44 AM

RE: To a Poet - by abu nuwas - 10-08-2011, 09:14 AM

RE: To a Poet - by Philatone - 10-08-2011, 12:34 PM

RE: To a Poet - by Aish - 10-09-2011, 01:19 AM

RE: To a Poet - by billy - 10-09-2011, 09:51 AM

RE: To a Poet - by addy - 10-10-2011, 03:46 PM

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