Down Slubbers' Row
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i hope you make use of the rich dialect used in that area chavi, in this poem the images work harder than the dialect.
which i like, but good old fashioned dialect can really add lots to this sort of poem. jmo Smile
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Down Slubbers' Row - by Ca ne fait rien - 10-05-2011, 06:08 AM
RE: Down Slubbers' Row - by billy - 10-05-2011, 11:14 AM
RE: Down Slubbers' Row - by Leanne - 10-06-2011, 04:56 AM
RE: Down Slubbers' Row - by billy - 10-06-2011, 05:57 AM
RE: Down Slubbers' Row - by addy - 10-06-2011, 02:37 PM
RE: Down Slubbers' Row - by abu nuwas - 10-07-2011, 03:10 AM
RE: Down Slubbers' Row - by Ca ne fait rien - 10-07-2011, 03:30 AM
RE: Down Slubbers' Row - by billy - 10-07-2011, 10:51 AM



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