10-07-2011, 03:30 AM
Thanks Billy, Leanne, Addy and Abu.
Re 'Pinches' - I think I may have missed out a line in transcription- must thumb through my notes and find it- either that or I edited it out before and didn't adjust the rest to match. Thanks for picking up on 't.
I am hoping at some point to get a collection of Yorkshire based poems together at some point, and they all need wokshopping editing and thrown out there to see if they can swim. I am glad I seem to have found the right place at last, where people are honest and constructive in the feedback.
Re 'Pinches' - I think I may have missed out a line in transcription- must thumb through my notes and find it- either that or I edited it out before and didn't adjust the rest to match. Thanks for picking up on 't.
I am hoping at some point to get a collection of Yorkshire based poems together at some point, and they all need wokshopping editing and thrown out there to see if they can swim. I am glad I seem to have found the right place at last, where people are honest and constructive in the feedback.