10-06-2011, 08:34 PM
Yes, there are no gerunds here. A gerund is like a verb-noun--- for example 'my critiquing you is well crap'. It has a predicate 'is', but also an object 'you'.
BTW, some European Intellectual has invented this new thing --- Main Verbs!
Seriously, I loved the way it kicked off, but felt, as I often do, that it was possibly two poems, yoked wrongly to-gether.
BTW, some European Intellectual has invented this new thing --- Main Verbs!

Seriously, I loved the way it kicked off, but felt, as I often do, that it was possibly two poems, yoked wrongly to-gether.

