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Down Slubbers' Row
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You had me at the first line. Both the imagery and the assonance in this piece is fantastic and so very clever. I believe "pinches" in line 6 ought to be "pinch" (if I am reading it right, with fingers as plural) but that aside, consider me wowed.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Down Slubbers' Row - by Ca ne fait rien - 10-05-2011, 06:08 AM
RE: Down Slubbers' Row - by billy - 10-05-2011, 11:14 AM
RE: Down Slubbers' Row - by Leanne - 10-06-2011, 04:56 AM
RE: Down Slubbers' Row - by billy - 10-06-2011, 05:57 AM
RE: Down Slubbers' Row - by addy - 10-06-2011, 02:37 PM
RE: Down Slubbers' Row - by abu nuwas - 10-07-2011, 03:10 AM
RE: Down Slubbers' Row - by Ca ne fait rien - 10-07-2011, 03:30 AM
RE: Down Slubbers' Row - by billy - 10-07-2011, 10:51 AM
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