10-05-2011, 07:14 PM
Philatone,
Hi and thanks for reading. Believe it or not, I had the idea of reversing the stanzas, but in the end, I went with 'blushing clouds' . . . I may yet change it. Thanks for the suggestions and the compliments.
Stef,
I thank you for the kind words and I will take the gerund count into consideration although I must admit I don't undersand exactly. Once or twice I've seen the gerund thing come up but I really don't understand what is wrong with using them. I guess I'll have to get off my butt and find out. Thanks for reading and feedback.
Hi and thanks for reading. Believe it or not, I had the idea of reversing the stanzas, but in the end, I went with 'blushing clouds' . . . I may yet change it. Thanks for the suggestions and the compliments.
Stef,
I thank you for the kind words and I will take the gerund count into consideration although I must admit I don't undersand exactly. Once or twice I've seen the gerund thing come up but I really don't understand what is wrong with using them. I guess I'll have to get off my butt and find out. Thanks for reading and feedback.