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(content) The Poet Considers...
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10-04-2011, 09:54 AM
This is brilliant! I loved reading it. I agree with Todd about your great sense of comic timing, from subtle to laugh out loud. "These colder stars" was a great addition... the narrator creates poetry, even as he's perving away
 A very solid piece, imo
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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(content) The Poet Considers... - by heslopian - 10-03-2011, 05:37 PM
RE: (content) The Poet Considers... - by billy - 10-03-2011, 05:54 PM
RE: (content) The Poet Considers... - by heslopian - 10-03-2011, 05:59 PM
RE: (content) The Poet Considers... - by Wildcard - 10-04-2011, 12:34 AM
RE: (content) The Poet Considers... - by heslopian - 10-04-2011, 03:52 AM
RE: (content) The Poet Considers... - by Todd - 10-04-2011, 04:31 AM
RE: (content) The Poet Considers... - by Wildcard - 10-04-2011, 04:37 AM
RE: (content) The Poet Considers... - by heslopian - 10-04-2011, 05:43 AM
RE: (content) The Poet Considers... - by addy - 10-04-2011, 09:54 AM
RE: (content) The Poet Considers... - by heslopian - 10-04-2011, 10:02 AM
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