Hiroshima First: A haiku:
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"Dry wind" skirts dangerously close to metaphor for me, but the concise image and that cynical third line are great. Thanks for the read.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by billy - 10-03-2011, 05:07 PM
RE: Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by heslopian - 10-03-2011, 05:12 PM
RE: Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by billy - 10-03-2011, 05:35 PM
RE: Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by heslopian - 10-03-2011, 05:41 PM
RE: Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by billy - 10-03-2011, 05:48 PM
RE: Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by heslopian - 10-04-2011, 08:25 AM
RE: Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by addy - 10-04-2011, 02:53 PM
RE: Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by billy - 10-04-2011, 03:40 PM
RE: Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by addy - 10-04-2011, 03:45 PM
RE: Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by billy - 10-04-2011, 03:58 PM
RE: Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by Aish - 10-06-2011, 03:50 AM
RE: Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by billy - 10-07-2011, 11:01 AM
RE: Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by Aish - 10-07-2011, 02:25 PM



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