10-03-2011, 07:51 AM
I really like this. It's witty and perceptive. This is probably how I'd react to a lot of feedback on my work if I let my narcissistic, childish side take over
Of course that's the problem most artists face, overcoming their egos in the search for beauty.
My one suggestion is that you trim the third line thusly: "And if you had any sense in your head".
Of course that's the problem most artists face, overcoming their egos in the search for beauty. My one suggestion is that you trim the third line thusly: "And if you had any sense in your head".
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe