09-30-2011, 01:03 PM
(09-30-2011, 04:29 AM)Heslopian Wrote: I'm even less than a layman, Sid...I don't know anything about musical composition...
I doubt that but if it's true then I must say, you possess a pretty good natural sense of rhythm, as this is pretty-tight-mostly-tetrameter throughout. The only bumpy points I see are S1L2, S3L3, S4L3, and S5L2 where these final feet become somewhat stretched out. Like I said, in songs this is not as much of a problem. These points are often over-looked if the music is good.
Sid