09-29-2011, 05:32 AM
Hi Sid,
I realize that this is a very elementary poem to someone with your experience (and frankly, even to mine), but it was and is a learning tool. Reading your post was like standing naked in front of the class at first, but everything you said rang true. So, I will definitely try your advice although i forsee basically an entire rewrite
Thanks for the feeback and tutorial. I am inching along through the self-education process and these words of experience are certainly appreciated
I realize that this is a very elementary poem to someone with your experience (and frankly, even to mine), but it was and is a learning tool. Reading your post was like standing naked in front of the class at first, but everything you said rang true. So, I will definitely try your advice although i forsee basically an entire rewrite
Thanks for the feeback and tutorial. I am inching along through the self-education process and these words of experience are certainly appreciated