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09-27-2011, 05:15 AM
Wonderful poem Patrick. You know I'm "different"... so I'm going to say something diferent. Leanne and Billy are correct about the syllable count... but... sometimes a small error strengthens a poem. Poetry doesn't have to be chamber music. It can be jazz. I like to add a "jar" or two... keeps the critics on their toes.
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Trees - by Patrick Traveler - 09-25-2011, 12:34 PM
RE: Trees - by Patrick Traveler - 09-27-2011, 03:25 PM
RE: Trees - by grannyjill - 09-25-2011, 07:52 PM
RE: Trees - by Ca ne fait rien - 09-26-2011, 03:54 AM
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