09-26-2011, 09:58 PM
A good sonnet, rhyme is unfortunately lost in translation, which is a big problem with rhyming poems. That is why I will not speak on this issue because in our tradition to talk about male and female rhymes. I especially like the final of the sonnet because it's unexpected, I am uneasy about the small discrepancy in style. Somehow, as the word "sanitary" in contrast with the magnificent image of the "blind musicians walk around the square",
in practice the use of modern words in a largely classical form as a suggestion and a poem is not the appropriate solution.
Thanks for sharing.
in practice the use of modern words in a largely classical form as a suggestion and a poem is not the appropriate solution.
Thanks for sharing.
'Because the barbarians will arrive today;and they get bored with eloquence and orations.' CP Cavafy