09-26-2011, 04:06 AM
This made me smile because I enjoyed it so much and because the misanthropic muse who so kindly gave the poem and dropped the golden token in the mendicant poet's hat may have been counting syllables just to tease. I shall leave it to her to suggest adjustments because I have not the skill to suggest improvements on this, and if I did, I am not sure that I would. I like it how it is.

