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She the Night
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09-20-2011, 01:55 AM
I like the play with sounds here, and the smooth flow that carries your reader effortlessly. I liked this read aloud, and I like the line-breaks working with breath as well as sense. I did pause at the ungrammatical 'I' but for some reason that felt right, as well. Kudos Leanne, I think your work in free verse is wonderful.
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She the Night - by Leanne - 09-05-2011, 09:55 AM
RE: She the Night - by Todd - 09-06-2011, 11:51 PM
RE: She the Night - by Leanne - 09-07-2011, 08:26 AM
RE: She the Night - by billy - 09-07-2011, 03:51 PM
RE: She the Night - by Leanne - 09-07-2011, 04:41 PM
RE: She the Night - by abu nuwas - 09-08-2011, 03:23 AM
RE: She the Night - by Leanne - 09-08-2011, 04:51 AM
RE: She the Night - by abu nuwas - 09-08-2011, 07:37 AM
RE: She the Night - by Leanne - 09-08-2011, 12:22 PM
RE: She the Night - by ICSoria - 09-16-2011, 12:49 PM
RE: She the Night - by Todd - 09-08-2011, 12:29 PM
RE: She the Night - by only rob - 09-09-2011, 04:05 AM
RE: She the Night - by Leanne - 09-09-2011, 05:14 AM
RE: She the Night - by heslopian - 09-15-2011, 11:59 AM
RE: She the Night - by Leanne - 09-16-2011, 05:06 AM
RE: She the Night - by Leanne - 09-16-2011, 01:08 PM
RE: She the Night - by Aish - 09-16-2011, 01:49 PM
RE: She the Night - by just mercedes - 09-20-2011, 01:55 AM
RE: She the Night - by Leanne - 09-20-2011, 12:00 PM
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