Songwriters and poets
#7
That one certainly does work as a poem -- never underestimate the power of simplicity, as long as it's not full of cliches and triteness. Those last two verses in particular are brilliant.

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Songwriters and poets - by Wildcard - 09-16-2011, 05:18 AM
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