09-16-2011, 05:06 AM
Thanks Jack.
You'll notice that I don't use a lot of white space in my poetry... I generally save it up for when I think it's important, and I kind of think it's important there. Yes, it references itself, but then so does the whole poem
As to the syntax, rules are for breaking, I'm sure you know that well 
You'll notice that I don't use a lot of white space in my poetry... I generally save it up for when I think it's important, and I kind of think it's important there. Yes, it references itself, but then so does the whole poem
As to the syntax, rules are for breaking, I'm sure you know that well
It could be worse