09-15-2011, 05:30 PM
(09-15-2011, 05:04 PM)billy Wrote: yes. rain is a part of nature as is food.i'm removing the word fortnight to try and create a tighter image.
plus, the modern haiku is allowed to use modern images.
i could have wrote;
Wimbledon fortnight
eating cream and strawberries-
rain stops play
which would be more compact and change the cutting line.
Wimbledon
eating cream and strawberries-
rain stops play