boyfriends drudgery and piss

boyfriends drudgery and piss

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09-14-2011, 06:18 AM

I'm curious as to what is added to this by the deliberate lack of punctuation. I'm not very far along in understanding the choices a poet makes about these things. If it's not too much of a hassle, could you give me your reasoning?

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boyfriends drudgery and piss - by heslopian - 09-10-2011, 01:26 AM

RE: boyfriends drudgery and piss - by billy - 09-10-2011, 08:52 AM

RE: boyfriends drudgery and piss - by heslopian - 09-10-2011, 02:58 PM

RE: boyfriends drudgery and piss - by billy - 09-10-2011, 07:48 PM

RE: boyfriends drudgery and piss - by heslopian - 09-11-2011, 12:47 AM

RE: boyfriends drudgery and piss - by Wildcard - 09-14-2011, 02:53 AM

RE: boyfriends drudgery and piss - by heslopian - 09-14-2011, 04:41 AM

RE: boyfriends drudgery and piss - by Wildcard - 09-14-2011, 06:18 AM

RE: boyfriends drudgery and piss - by heslopian - 09-14-2011, 06:55 AM

RE: boyfriends drudgery and piss - by Wildcard - 09-14-2011, 07:44 AM

RE: boyfriends drudgery and piss - by LaGitana - 09-15-2011, 01:06 AM

RE: boyfriends drudgery and piss - by heslopian - 09-15-2011, 11:02 AM

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