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boyfriends drudgery and piss
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09-14-2011, 04:41 AM
You're right about the punctuation. The first sentence should have a full stop, but because I don't use any other indications to pause throughout the piece I didn't include one.
Thanks for your feedback and kind words, AA 
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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boyfriends drudgery and piss - by heslopian - 09-10-2011, 01:26 AM
RE: boyfriends drudgery and piss - by billy - 09-10-2011, 08:52 AM
RE: boyfriends drudgery and piss - by heslopian - 09-10-2011, 02:58 PM
RE: boyfriends drudgery and piss - by billy - 09-10-2011, 07:48 PM
RE: boyfriends drudgery and piss - by heslopian - 09-11-2011, 12:47 AM
RE: boyfriends drudgery and piss - by Wildcard - 09-14-2011, 02:53 AM
RE: boyfriends drudgery and piss - by heslopian - 09-14-2011, 04:41 AM
RE: boyfriends drudgery and piss - by Wildcard - 09-14-2011, 06:18 AM
RE: boyfriends drudgery and piss - by heslopian - 09-14-2011, 06:55 AM
RE: boyfriends drudgery and piss - by Wildcard - 09-14-2011, 07:44 AM
RE: boyfriends drudgery and piss - by LaGitana - 09-15-2011, 01:06 AM
RE: boyfriends drudgery and piss - by heslopian - 09-15-2011, 11:02 AM
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