boyfriends drudgery and piss

[Wildcard]

"you can leave any time you know that" this is a nice opener. like the opening line of a short story, it draws me in. Should there be puncutation (a '.' or ',') after 'time'?

i know

but i am lazy as Pinocchio
slouching by the busy road

i'd rather rot in this prison of air

my laughter and rage the wardens i got lost on this line. it doesn't seem right, but it could just be me not understanding

than risk the traffic of life
boyfriends drudgery and piss love how brutally honest this line is

getting checked for AIDs each year
like it's a fucking birthday (i wonder if the doctors give out lollipops) great p.s. kind of thought

watching my family
swell like a grape with new life

an army of nieces and nephews
to hate me like all children do

death is no comfort

but if anyone dares to enrgave on my tomb
"HE DIED THE WAY HE LIVED"
i'll haunt them into suicide solid close. really got me thinking

   I can't say I completely understand this, but I am interested in it for sure. I got the gist of it, I think aits a really resigned fate that comes off the screen at me. Thanks for posting this. I will come back and have a look later in my journey and see what comes to mind then.