The Cycle
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I'm new to reading and understanding poetry, but I feel fairly confident that I get this. It is so powerful and makes me think of my own family. I loved so many of the phrases:

retching the absurdities
...
pours through, anoints your face
with blue oils
...
a hole to crawl into,
bring your own unwitting pups

All perfect IMO
This is a great poem, sir.
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The Cycle - by heslopian - 09-12-2011, 05:06 AM
RE: The Cycle - by addy - 09-12-2011, 08:13 PM
RE: The Cycle - by Wildcard - 09-12-2011, 10:58 PM
RE: The Cycle - by billy - 09-17-2011, 01:36 PM
RE: The Cycle - by heslopian - 09-17-2011, 02:18 PM



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