Faith's Panorama

[billy]

Would the first line of the third verse feel less preachy if instead of "stereotypes" I put "worshipping kinds"?
Neither of the "ours" are needed, but I think they add an air of intimacy. I think removing them would make the verse seem didactic somehow.
Thanks for your feedback and kind words Bilbo

for me, it's the 'angry' part that feels a little preachy. it feels like the narrator is voicing an opinion (which is allowed of course)
if you used;

angry stereotypes,
the peasants and the urbanites,
who understand neither.

i'm not so sure myself but it's an option to look at.