09-05-2011, 12:58 PM
Thank you for the feedback Leanne
I'll have a play with the first stanza tomorrow. I may divide it into a series of short sentences to make the grammar less convoluted.
I'll have a play with the first stanza tomorrow. I may divide it into a series of short sentences to make the grammar less convoluted.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

